everdred (everdred) wrote in suggestions,
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Simplify text message statement

Title
Simplify text message statement

Short, concise description of the idea
Alter "Send everdred a text message on his/her cellphone/pager" statement to something like "Send a text message to everdred's mobile device"

Full description of the idea
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An ordered list of benefits
  • Clarity - the present statement is a bit awkward, having two variables in one sentence

An ordered list of problems/issues involved
  • People may not be able to make sense of the "mobile device," so perhaps the "cell phone/pager" can be left as is. This is still better than the present statement, though not optimal, because... well, are cell phones and pagers the only devices that can receive SMSes?

An organized list, or a few short paragraphs detailing suggestions for implementation
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