Simplify text message statement
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Alter "Send everdred a text message on his/her cellphone/pager" statement to something like "Send a text message to everdred's mobile device"
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- Clarity - the present statement is a bit awkward, having two variables in one sentence
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- People may not be able to make sense of the "mobile device," so perhaps the "cell phone/pager" can be left as is. This is still better than the present statement, though not optimal, because... well, are cell phones and pagers the only devices that can receive SMSes?
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